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Which type of vampire?
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So, there's already talk of which is better, vampire or lycan. I'm firmly on the vampire side of the discussion. What I'm curious about now, is which kind of vampire is better.The softer ones, that…Continue

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My book is out.  Been out for a little while.  It's available through both Amazon on the Kindle, and in print-on-demand through Barnes & Noble.…Continue

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I'm a debut novelist of paranormal romance. My book is out from Crescent Moon Press. I like vampires, so my hero is naturally a vampire.

I'm a writer, though I still have to work. One day, I might be a full-time author.

Check out some of my stories on my site, and read the ongoing story I have on my blog. Get a collection of my short stories for the Kindle.


*All Hallows Blood Excerpt. Novel available at Crescent Moon press*



Varick met my gaze, his eyes hard chips of blue. “I am judging your skills, attempting to discern how you bested a vampire past the neophyte stage.”

“Maybe he was just a loser,” I offered, crossing my arms under my breasts as I settled into the corner. Varick's sweater was loose enough across my chest, but it pulled tight when I trapped the fabric like this. I thought his eyes flicked across my form, but couldn’t be sure. I didn't know if I cared, despite the desire I'd had for him earlier. “Just because he's a vampire doesn't automatically make him badass.”

“Actually,” he said, suddenly in my face, his arms braced on either side of my shoulders, “it does.” Varick leaned closer, enveloping me in his aroma, our bodies nearly touching. He still didn’t register in my psychic perceptions, but my aura parted around him. I swallowed hard, and his eyes went to my neck.

“Vampires are predators,” he said with a husky voice. He made no attempt to disguise the way his gaze caressed my neck. My pulse jumped as I imagined his lips tracing my skin, and I bit my tongue stud. Varick knew he disconcerted me, and he seemed intent on using it to make his point. “Once we are strong enough to be away from our master, we are stronger than any human.”

I uncrossed my arms, standing a little taller, letting anger rise to displace the sadness completely. Was this really the same man who'd held me an hour ago while I cried, who'd bared his own sorrow to me? My heart skipped a beat as I carefully put my hands by my side, attempting to show that I wasn't frightened of him. I wondered if he tasted my hidden fear, if he could tell it was all a lie. “I've read accounts of vampires getting killed by humans.” I held his gaze, even as the sapphire brilliance darkened with his expanding pupils. It didn't even occur to me that I'd admitted to having knowledge of his kind when I hadn't earlier. “That vamp didn't sound that strong.”

The German must have allowed some of his aura loose, because his presence swelled. He didn't move, yet I instantly felt trapped by Varick. My blood ran cold, and I pressed myself farther into the corner. I didn't care if he knew I was scared. No one with a self preservation instinct wouldn't be scared. This was the atavistic fear all creatures carried, something in the genes that let us know when we were being hunted.

His eyes bored into mine, pinning me as easily as his body. “Even were that account true, do you really think a bunch of mewling mortals stalked into a vampire's lair and killed him without help? Perhaps he was set up? Or was he a neophyte abandoned by his master?”

I shivered, his breath washing across my face. The account I'd read was from a hunter, and he'd hinted at being a psionicist. No mewling mortal there, but someone who could level the playing field. I could tell him what I was, take the mystery out of it, but then he'd know everything about me. I couldn't do that.

The elevator bounced to a stop, chiming as the doors opened. “We're here,” I said, unable to look away from his captivating eyes.

“Never mind that,” he whispered huskily, turning his head as his gaze fell once more to my neck. My skin crawled with biting fire as he leaned forward, close enough that a deep breath would bring us together. My head slowly turned, a breathless whimper escaping my lips. I didn't know what was happening to me, but I wanted him to taste me. Right now. I shuddered, from either fear or desire, as his breath touched my bared neck. “Could you stop me?” he asked, his voice dropping lower. “Would your fighting skills do you any good in here?”

Varick's lips were nearly to my neck, the air stirred by their motion. My eyes closed, a soft groan rising from my throat. The vampire stiffened, and his left hand drifted closer to my shoulder. I couldn't think of anything but his mouth, and how his hair would feel tangled through my fingers. I wanted to tell him the vampire in the house hadn't had this kind of presence, that until he'd bitten me, there had been no desire for him. With the German so achingly close to me, I couldn't think of raising a hand to him.

I groaned again, gritting my teeth in frustration. I was not some sort of easy lay; I simply did not lust for someone like this so quickly. It had to be some function of his power, something to lull his prey into submission. It couldn't be my own hormones running rampant.

The doors swished closed behind us, and I let my eyes flutter open. I saw Varick's hand scratching at the paneling, scars standing out against icy flesh. We'd moved so close in that span of seconds, his mouth was a breath away from the vein in my neck. “Varick,” I whispered in a strangled voice. If either of us moved, my throat would end up against his teeth. It took more willpower than I realized I had to hold still.

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Which type of vampire?

So, there's already talk of which is better, vampire or lycan. I'm firmly on the vampire side of the discussion. What I'm curious about now, is which kind of vampire is better.The softer ones, that are still seeking their humanity, and won't drink human blood, and fear they're a danger?Or the harder ones, that are still predators, that will kill, and do drink blood, and don't think of themselves as human?Or something in between?See More
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I'm going to be guest blogging over at salamanderstales.blogspot.com Friday the 19th. Stop by to read up on my view on the Plotter/Panster debate. Which is really only something writers care about, but you might like it anyway.

Or you can come by my blog, ravencorrincarluk.blogspot.com. Read my serial story, or contact me to be a guest blogger.

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At 11:24pm on May 23, 2010, Katrina Michaels said…
I completely understand. Whenever I find a new review, I always have to take a deep breath before I can read it
At 11:22pm on May 16, 2010, Katrina Michaels said…
Hi, I finished your book this weekend and liked it quite a bit. I left a review for on Amazon.
At 1:19pm on March 27, 2010, Katrina Michaels said…
You're book just arrived the other day. I have two I'm reading now, but as soon as I'm done with them, yours is next. And always happy to put smiles on peoples faces =)
At 10:01pm on March 17, 2010, Katrina Michaels said…
Just wanted you to know that I'm buying your book on Friday!
At 11:14pm on March 14, 2010, Katrina Michaels said…
Ah, it's also on Amazon. I will buy a copy this week! Thanks for the friend invite on Facebook!
At 10:33am on March 13, 2010, Katrina Michaels said…
Yes, there is a lot of waiting involved with book publications. Reviews can take up to 6 months. You might also look into doing interviews with people who have blogs. Or giveaways. I would suggest joining goodreads.com. They have a lot of tools for authors including creating giveaways for recently released books.
Let me know when your book is out in print on barnesandnoble.com and I'll look for it. Us new authors have to stick together!
At 11:54pm on March 8, 2010, Katrina Michaels said…
Thanks, I haven't had anyone jealous of me for quite some time. Midnight Reflections is my debut book and has been out a little less than a year now. The review are good, but I still have to get more people to buy copies. Marketing can be annoying and it takes time away from writing. I wish you luck with that aspect.
When is your book being released and where will it be available? Mine can be purchased online through amazon.com, barnesandnoble.com, and bookdepository.com
At 11:25pm on March 6, 2010, Katrina Michaels said…
Hi to another author! Good luck with your writing
At 11:54pm on February 26, 2010, Adrianne said…
Hello Raven Welcome to the Blood Bank!!
At 8:56am on February 26, 2010, Steph said…
Hi Raven! Welcome to the Blood Bank!!
 
 
 

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